Tarnius Chokes a Bitch WIP

Still a work in progress, but there's a lot wrong with it and I'll miss a huge chunk of it so please hurl feed back at me, kick my head in.

I'll update it as I update it

(The reason he has his shirt off? Officially he was having a wash and a dude tried to assasinate him, the real reson? I just got me an anatomy book and i'm trying it out )

So again, please tell me what you think.


[edit] First update, please, keep the critique coming, this is helping a lot thank you! :]

[edit] Second update, this tone stuff is haaard... I just thought I should update to show you all that I'm still doing stuff, honest.

[edit] Third update, I'm not sure if I'm happy with these colours... it was a bit of a struggle tbh, any feed back would be welcome :]